Thursday, September 26, 2013

AET Week 4 Peer Review




I reviewed William’s advertisement entitled Stuff Vodka, Everyone’s Favorite Fuzzy Memory. Your ad design is very effective by it understanding the needs of the current alcohol industry. It is understood that drinking alcohol can lead to feelings of enjoyment and satisfaction. It made me want to revisit my own design to determine the needs of the target market base to effectively convey an undeniable message to the audience. It was interesting how you choose to incorporate movement, balance, and proportion to your advertisement.  I think that the supporting text helped to advertisement to tell a story to the viewer.
What were you trying to communicate by displaying a woman hoola-hooping in a bar scene?  Did you mean to convey the message the anything can happen when you being to consume Stuff Vodka? The colors palette presented in the advertisement provides a more solemn tone, where as adding additional hues complimentary to the color wheel will offer more dynamic to the advertisement.
Have you considered changing the setting of your advertisement? The bar scene is not the only social place to drink alcohol especially vodka.  You might want to explore different settings to convey a more creative message to the audience.
Perhaps you can refine your design by having a group of people having the time of their lives holding the signature bottle or a replica. This can consist of more than two people but less than five people. You do not want to overcrowd your essential message. You could repurpose this by channeling the emotion to a wider crowd. Consider bolding the text and using more elaborate font types and colors to bring the ad to life. 

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